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Debbie Goddard |
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Posts: 26 (03/16/05 06:48:11) |
PLease can you send me th x rated parts of this story
thanks Debbie |
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adria |
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Posts: 795 (03/16/05 07:20:55) |
they are more pg13 than X..If you register at this site and send me a note I can attach a copy of those chapters and get them out to you!!
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Posts: 0 (03/16/05 21:08:29) |
Please send unedited chapters! Thanks!
(Fantastic story by the way) |
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Debbie Goddard |
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Posts: 26 (03/17/05 05:10:20) |
I cannot register on the site at work it will not allow me
is there any other way i can get the x rated versions off you thanks Debbie I have a email address at home you could send them to me there if that is ok. |
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adria |
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Posts: 795 (03/17/05 06:43:48) |
if you are unregistered and would like to see more of the story...leave your email address in a post and i'll send it to you!!
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Posts: 0 (03/17/05 07:47:35) |
Sorry...never even thought to leave my email address:
Mickee_D@hotmail.com Thanks! |
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adria |
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Posts: 795 (03/17/05 08:16:08) |
Hey MIckee...i'll email it out to you. leave me feedback so i know that you received it!! thanks
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Debbie Goddard |
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Posts: 26 (03/18/05 05:14:56) |
hi
thanks Adria my emial address is Debbie.Goddard@lvl.co.uk if you have problems send to hazel.g@freeUK.com which is my home one(it's my mums but she doesn't read it. Let me know when you have sent it on my own for the x rated version thanks Debbie |
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Posts: 486 (03/18/05 08:26:27) Moderator |
This feedback is from kylie2903
____________________________________________________ I really have enjoyed your story! well done!! could you please send me the unedited version that you didnt post here, that would be great! Looking forward to reading it! thanks again Kylie tksunners@dart.net.au ____________________________________________________ Remember to post all feedback here as it makes it easier for people to read the stories without having to scroll through the feedback comments.   lafemme
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AuntDA |
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Posts: 28 (03/18/05 10:38:37) |
Adria--
Just "found" the fan fiction this week, and have managed to (obsessively) read all the stories. Really like your work--you have a talent for writing. Wanted to request the "juicy" stuff, though. Seems like something was missing while reading, and the good stuff seems to be it! Thanks! |
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sphinxdiva |
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Posts: 3 (03/25/05 23:06:53) |
Adria, love Bodyguard, please send me the jucier versions.
sphinxdiva3000@yahoo.com Thank you. Sing once again with me our strange duet...
My power over you grows stronger yet... And though you turn from me, to glance behind, the Phantom of the Opera is there - inside your mind...  |
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lafemmefantome |
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Posts: 486 (03/27/05 00:51:59) Moderator |
I read your story and loved it. I was wondering if you could send me the unedited version. Thanks!
this is feedback from GerrysGirl74 ____________________________________________________ please remember to post all feedback in the feedback forum and not in the middle of the story or at the end. Thank you lafemme lafemme
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ImagoDei |
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Posts: 14 (03/31/05 14:07:45) |
Thanks for the excluded material you PM'd me. Good stuff. I really liked this story.
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Posts: 2 (04/04/05 13:03:45) |
Wow - I'm loving this so far! Please send me the PG 13 parts. Thanks! - SoCalGal57Feb
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socalgal57feb |
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Posts: 2 (04/04/05 13:35:27) |
ummm... I mean the X versions... silly me.... mmmm....
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Tipsywitch |
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Posts: 2 (04/15/05 07:21:58) |
Oh Boy.....cold shower... oh to be Steph.
 Wonderful story. More please!! |
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GerrysGirl74 |
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Posts: 129 (04/16/05 07:43:46) |
Hi! I loved your story. Could you send me the unedited version. here's my e-mail address:
amethystunycorn@hotmail.com Thanks! |
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valmik |
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Posts: 30 (04/19/05 06:44:28) |
Hi there!
Right, the whole story is fabulous, I so much enjoyed reading it ! The un-rated versions are so So in place! Thank you, Adria! And I just can't help adding a wee-wee note - I loved the "train scene"
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littlepaty |
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Posts: 758 (06/13/05 08:58:52) Moderator |
Restoration
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Posts: 65 (07/21/05 16:19:16) |
Well, I think i've made my opinion pretty well know. Nevertheless, I extend my praise once more. I look forward to the italian adventure.
I thought the character descriptions were very detailed, and your character development was suprisingly in depth despite the relatively short length of the fic. Very nice. I only wish Lara Croft's terry would have been as caring and thoughtful as your terry, maybe she wouldn't have offed him like she did. Witch. Ruined it for the rest of us....lol  "O God in Heaven you're all obsessed!" "Life is more beautiful because we are damned. You will never be lovelier than you are at this very moment..." |
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