Thanks,
Chris
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cslev |
Feedback for The Quartering |
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Hi, this is the place to post comments on The Quartering.
Thanks, Chris |
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ashleyej |
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Dear Chris:
I am reading your story and I just love it. It's a wonderful thing to read a story about our own country in its beginning. My own ancestor fought in the Revolution, and I've always had a great interest in that time in our history. I can't wait for the next chapters. please keep up the good work. I also enjoyed Music of the Light very much! Thanks so much, Jane |
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lady saule |
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I just finished reading the Quartering. I have always loved reading about the American Revolution so, of coarse, I was intrigued. I can hardly wait to read more.
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cslev |
Historical Background | ||
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Hi, Jane and ladysaule,
Thank you for your comments--I know it's risky writing a historical romance and getting the facts and dialog to fit, so if something isn't quite right I hope you will let me know. With Music of the Light there were a few comments on the dialog being too modern, so this is my weak area...but the main objective is for you to enjoy what you read and hopefully be inspired. chris |
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Hi Christine..I thought I would let you know I have been reading your new story and I love it. Once again I find myself hoping you made a new post. V.C. Andrews was my favorite author I would always be waiting for her newest book and now I am waiting for yours. I hope many more people get the chance to read you work .... now hurry up with the rest!!! hehehehe .... Chat with ya soon ... Denise
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cslev |
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Denise!
Good to hear from ya--sorry but no new chapter yet thanks to a very hectic week (holidays and work)...but thanks for encouraging me on. Hope to put a new chapter up within the next week... Chris PS- I'm not familiar with VC Andrews' work but I have heard the name. What kind of writer is he/she? |
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lady saule |
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I just finished the lastest installment of your story. I really like your characters and am waiting to see what happens next. Keep going.
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cslev |
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Hi, Lady S,
Thank you for your comments--I have several other chapters I'm working on and hope to post the next one by Friday, if possible. Arranged marriage coming up soon... Chris |
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lady saule |
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I'll be looking for your next post. The arranged marriage - yours or your characters
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cslev |
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Hey Lady Saule,
The characters' arranged marriage, not mine, he he! (been married since 1978...) chris |
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lady saule |
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that's good. hahahah. Looking forward to what is going to happen next.
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cslev |
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Oops, it will not be an arranged marriage, but a forced one (Aaron and Ceara's not mine!)
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lady saule |
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Sounds really interesting. I am anxiously awaiting your next installment. Hope that it is soon. Saule
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cslev |
New Chapter Finished | ||
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Sorry for the delay, but finally the next chapter is ready for your comments!
Thanks, chris |
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lady saule |
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First off,let me wish you a Happy Mother's Day. I hope that it is a good one for you, filled with lots of rest and relaxation.
I just finished reading your latest post, I can so see Aaron trying to get up and leave. Good work on this. I am again waiting anxiously to see what is going to happen next. Especially with the forced marriage. |
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cslev |
Happy Mother's Day | ||
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You know I wanted to wish you and everyone a happy Mother's Day but then I thought if readers were not mothers they might feel left out, anyway it got late and I had to rush to post just that little additional chapter and by the time I managed to finish it I totally forgot!
As you can tell I'm trying somewhat unsuccessfully to have a restful day--thank you for your good wishes! Chris |
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cslev |
Finally The Next Chapter! | ||
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Presenting Chapter 5 with apologies for the long delay. There was/still is a lot to sort out and I have yet to fix the year and exact setting. I wish I had time to go back "home" as I grew up not too far from Oriskany NY where a huge battle took place. All those museums and forts and I never went to one! Now I'm regretting it, but of course I wasn't interested in reading or writing historical romance then!
Hope you all enjoy this next part, and many thanks for your patience. Chris |
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lady saule |
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I just read your latest post. I love the tension that is building between Aaron and Ceara. And I know what you mean about researching facts for your story. Keep up the good work and I look forward to your next post.
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montaquecat |
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finally have a computer back. (at home) read the quartering all the way through. i like your characters. ceara is very nice and caring. aaron sounds yummy. (if he is patterned after gb of course he is i am happy that he met up with faith and saw that she was safe. i hope eventually that ceara and aaron get married (even an arranged marriage to start off with) and faith and her little brother eventually live with them as a family unit. i do not like her sisters husband. he is evil. he is playing both sides for his own gain. he will eventually turn on his family (wife) and go where the money is. i do not like how he is trying to set up his sister-in-law with someone of his own liking. he wants ceara out of the way. i think he realizes that she is on to him. like i said i think caleb is evil. i like how |
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cslev |
New Chapter Finally Posted | ||
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Feeling some amount of chagrin, I offer the latest chapter, hopefully for your reading pleasure. I apologize for being so slow with this, but ask for your comments and reviews...
Chris |
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cslev |
Another New Chapter! | ||
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And another...presenting Chapter 7, heating up
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